Hey bloggers!!!
This is a thing called sick sentences
here are the sick sentences.
The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.
And here is the new sentence
Walking the man heaved his aching feet up the chilly slippery slope.
He used extreamely heavy poles.The sun was blindingly bright. The sky was deep baby blue. She was would be hopeful and gracious when she reached the tippy top.
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Ava
Kia Ora my name is Deborah and im in room 24. I really liked your blog post about sick sentences I like your new sentence a lot because you added adverbs and verbs. I remember when I did something like this it was so fun. Have you ever tried putting a picture that is something to do with this topic?
ReplyDeleteyou should check out my blog
https://odsdeborah.blogspot.com/
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Ava
Hey Deborah
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. I am glad that you noticed That
I used Verbs and adverbs.
Next time I will try add a image!!!
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💮Ava💮